Needs a background
...And music and more details.
It's nice but looks to basic and simple.
You did good for your first flash.
Needs better quality for the voice
Your sound is identical to Unter Null and terrorflak which I love it.
02:37 - 03:08 was nice
The voice in the song directed me away from liking it.
But that part at 02:37 - 03:08 was worth mentioning.
I gtg so don't have time to finish review.
Well, sorry you didn't like the singing. It was my first try at that, and hopefully it'll improve.
Was it the voice itself, or the sound quality? If it was the sound quality, the link I posted is much better.
Thanks for the review.
Please re-write this
I really didn't like the part 00:022-00:27.
If you replaced some synths with guitar arpeggios.
and lower the other remaining synths cut volume by 15%.
....And replaced the piano part at 01:24'ish.
I would of liked this song allot.
In this song i see so much potential and possibilities but in the form it is in right now i just don't feel it enough.
I tried to do that, but unfortunately I couldn't get my guitar to record clearly, and my speaker system isn't really the best so I hear things slightly differently, thanks for your feedback though
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